Reviewer: Adonnen Estenniel (Signed)
12/10/11 - 09:21 pm
I really like this unique take on things. The idea that the ban could have been circumvented by sailing east rather than west never ocurred to me, and I love the idea. Obviously, the Valar were not forward-thinking enough in this case.
Adittionally, the original characters you introduce in this piece are wonderful. I liked Cullasso's frank style of narration—it was wonderful to experience this from his perspective; I thought it was just right.
Thank you very much!