Reviews For Shadows Lengthen Ere Close of Day

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Reviewer: Zdenka (Signed)
09/02/14 - 04:50 pm
Chapter 1

I really liked this. I enjoy seeing major story events from the point of view of an OC. I like the narrator's loyalty to Faramir and the Stewards and his doubt of the new King -- it does seem plausible that not everyone would have immediately given their allegiance to someone who is, after all, a stranger. But it's emotionally convincing that by the end, he would find Aragon to be someone he can willingly follow.

One very minor thing -- I think you wrote prophesy a couple of times where you meant prophecy. (I noticed it because I've made that same mistake in reverse.)

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