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Reviewer: curiouswombat (Signed)
12/07/14 - 07:18 am
Legend of the Dream Wanderer

I think the legend works well - and now Iam thinking Rainiriel must be a foremother of Legolas....

I really like Eldarion in this story, a young man with his own peronality.

Also I think Arwen probably has a point about the embroidery of the story of Luthien and Beren!



Author's Response: Thank you! Rainiriel's relationship to Legolas has been revealed in the two latest chapters. I won't spoil anything though. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Reviewer: Kapi Longbeard (Signed)
08/02/14 - 08:23 am
Prologue

Excellent! You kept the suspence--wondering who the character is--whilst gradually building up the bank of clues until I was just becoming confident in my guess when you revealed the name. 

There was a typo I noticed if you are looking for that sort of thing...

"OfOr if they did, it would be long after he had sailed West." Line 16



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! And thanks for the typo!! I am kind of OCD about that sort of thing. :) Glad you are enjoying the story!

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Reviewer: curiouswombat (Signed)
07/15/14 - 12:09 pm
Fleeing

I am just now catching up - and looking forward to the next chapter.

 

(But I fear there are never many reviews to hits here, lovely though everyone is!)



Author's Response: Thank you! I've noticed there isn't much review activity here. I always try to review what I read, but I don't get much time for that anymore if I want to write too! It's a balancing act with time management! :/

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