Reviews For The Elder Oak

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Reviewer: tiinaj1 (Signed)
01/10/15 - 11:29 am
Chapter 10

Great story! I liked how you used a tree as the evil character against legolas who grew up trusting trees. I'm assuming you used a tree similar to the trees in the great old forest outside of Buckland which would pull unsuspecting characters in and the "eat" them. These were trees that let evil absorb them. Great idea!

The only thing I can see that needs to be worked on is spelling. There are a lot of words misspelled or missing altogether. Perhaps a beta next time would help. I know when I write I tend to leave out words accidentally or misspell words because my spell check gets ahead of itself. :( I'd be happy to help u with some of the spelling errors & such - I'm not terribly good w commas & semi colons but to be honest I didn't notice that much of a problem w grammer.

Thanks for a very interesting story!

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Reviewer: Karri (Signed)
12/25/14 - 11:29 pm
Chapter 1

Fantastic story!  ONe of my all time favorites.  Thanks for writing it.

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Reviewer: Ellynn (Signed)
10/28/14 - 01:58 am
Chapter 3

Good chapter. I am so curious to find out about the old tree.

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Reviewer: Ellynn (Signed)
10/21/14 - 04:36 am
Chapter 1

Great start - action and cliffhanger! :) I hope you'll update soon.

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