Reviewer: sian22 (Signed)
08/17/15 - 02:08 pm
I absolutely love the 'voice' you use for Elrond and the brothers and all the details you set in. So glad you have reposted it here.
Thank you so much. :)
Reviewer: tiinaj1 (Signed)
04/03/15 - 10:35 pm
Interesting story. I noticed though the twins are written much older than 6 years old and also they were kidnapped when they were 2-3 years old approximately. So did they arrive at this fortress years later? Also I believe according to Tolkien that they stayed in a camp & not a fortress after they were taken for several years. The story just seems off some...
Thanks for the comment. I wrote this story three years ago, when I hadn't read as much about Maglor and the twins. Since the story is complete, I won't be making any changes. I'm just reposting it here.