Reviewer: Larner (Signed)
12/26/10 - 07:40 pm
Considering the use of archaic forms of language used by the Mouth of Sauron, you have followed a precedent set by the Master himself. Artire would do better, of course, to return to Valinor and crave pardon, but it appears his days of playing at games of dominance are not yet over.
Interesting. Although I'm surprised that Melkor is not yet out in the Void, and that he still has all three of the Silmarils. I like that they burn him-- that is a good tocuh, and in keeping with what we know of their nature.