Reviewer: Huinare (Signed)
03/31/16 - 04:15 pm
I really like how both Idril and Maeglin, without Idril realizing it, are both talking about his feelings for her at different points--when she says he is jealous, and when he says he knows about love turning to bitterness. Oh Idril, if only you knew..
Author's Response: Thank you very much! That dramatic irony is one of the main things I was going for. I'm glad you liked it.