Reviewer: Keiliss (Signed)
09/11/17 - 07:53 pm
The whole thing is perfect, Himring. You convince me this is how it was. Maglor trying to help a woman and two anonymous children really spoke to me - got more than he bargained for there. I liked the different POVs, they brought it fully to life. My sympathies would normally be firmly with Elwing here, but there are no rights or wrongs, just shades of grey that left me feeling for Maedhros. Btothers lost, a smile at a memory, a thoughtless gesture....
So glad I found this!
Thank you very much, Kei!
I'm so glad you find this convincing and the POVs brought it to life for you!
Reviewer: Oshun (Signed)
07/29/17 - 12:11 pm
Well done! I particularly liked the repetition of the lines about Amrod and Amros.
Thank you very much, Oshun!
I'm glad that repetition worked for you!