Reviewer: Himring (Signed)
11/19/17 - 05:47 am
Really good characterization of OCs.
It is very bleak, of course. I couldn't help hoping for better times for Khule, despite his premonitions.
Appreciated Himring. I won't spoil it as there is further on Khule. Have yet to post it tho'. Perhaps today, should the fates permit it.
Reviewer: Hanasian (Signed)
11/08/17 - 07:17 pm
This is very well written! Love Freja!
I really do think that we should, in time, write up/develop further what unfolds whilst Freja is knocking about in Dale with Vidugavia. That occurs well prior to this episode, for in this raids have tipped over into outright incursions along the East Fold (fanned by Sauron and likely abetted, at the least, by Saruman who was eager to see Rohan weakened and hence unable to aid Gondor nor Arnor). In this episode, Freja has returned to Rohan from her banishment and resumed her duties as second in command.
It could be fun indeed to develop a younger Freja and Videgavia both, before the events of the War of the Ring left an indelible imprint on each of their characters.