Reviews For Farewell to Dol Amroth

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Reviewer: Thundera Tiger (Signed)
07/06/10 - 11:44 pm
Farewell to Dol Amroth

It never occurred to me that Lothiriel might leave a farewell note to her father, but after reading this, I have a hard time imagining it happening any other way. Linking Lothiriel's departure with the departure of Finduilas was an especially nice touch, and it really creates a sense of how much harder this parting must seem to Imrahil. Nice job drawing that parallel and giving it new significance!

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Reviewer: Virtuella (Signed)
07/05/10 - 05:36 pm
Farewell to Dol Amroth

What a wise and kind young woman this letter shows Lothiriel to be!



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Reviewer: Rhapsody (Signed)
02/26/10 - 03:23 am
Farewell to Dol Amroth

This is just so poignant Nautika, the first line immediately gets to you, but foremost this letter speaks of a love of a daughter for her father, the care and duty she still feels she has, but not out of duty...

This moment is so wonderfully and beautifully conveyed, I can almost imagine how Imrahil stands there, his hands probably shaking and yet and maybe experiencing that jolt of pride because of his daughter he's so proud of. Yeps I am getting carried away, but well can you blame me after reading this magnificent piece?

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